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:iconkitcatpics:
Kitcatpics Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm not the only one who sees that red dot next to the moon right?
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:iconkittehcrazy:
kittehcrazy Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014
i honestly cant believe i havent found this comic till now. i love the story and i love the characters. its amazing ^-^
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:iconlaceythearchangel:
LaceyTheArchangel Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Red star in the sky anybody?
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AderusNimerath327 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm really late, but I saw that the first time I read Off-White, but I thought it was just my computer, then I read it again on another computer and it was still there... but then I read the rest of the story and I thought it was Hati. 'Cause that made sense so yeah!! XD
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samwolf3974 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
i saw it too!
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:iconhfefier:
HFefier Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Its actually hati i think.... the clouds sort of look like a wolf swallowing the moon or something.... that would be my guess.... but yeah it is red
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Dragondog2233 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
DAT CLOUD
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ClarkyGirl Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012
Wow Iki, I nearly fell in there
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:iconlululolabu:
lululolabu Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012
Red point at the sky, I saw it O.e
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:iconmtindoll:
mtindoll Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012
I can see Hati's red eye and face; his jaws are just above and below the moon.
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:iconassassinscreedfreak:
AssassinscreedFreak Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012  Student Filmographer
RED STAR!!! RED STAR!!
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:iconangelosnowpaw:
AngeloSnowpaw Featured By Owner May 23, 2012
is that a monster eating the moon!? :o
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:iconarroq:
Arroq Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012  Student General Artist
it's Hati
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:iconphotosareme:
PhotosAreMe Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Student Photographer
Red dot in sky..Hmm.
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:iconash-mota-13:
Ash-Mota-13 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thats so creepy the moon is gonna get bit
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:iconfruitbatslyra:
fruitbatslyra Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
The way you do the sky is just so...so beautiful...
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:iconheisbreakingmyheart:
heisbreakingmyheart Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
*le gasp* Evil clouds with savage teeth and red star eye!!!!
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:iconcarolina22:
Carolina22 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
beautiful work!!
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:icondewspyrit:
Dewspyrit Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012
i'm guessing the red dot is Hati?
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:iconwolpyx:
WolpyX Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012
Hahahahaha! It's time for Iki sleep!
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Felizis Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012
Now Iki is the one who is angry and can not sleep, because the others can not be quiet:D I really like his angry face and his eyes on the panel next to it once again. The awesome sky with Hati and the moon make a perfect image and add a great atmosphere to the scene once more. The stars are really pretty and I would just love to count them all…But as Iki has just said, it’s not possible. The mountains under the moon, lit by it and the stars are done so wonderful. It reminds me of my trip to the alps two winters ago. Yawning Iki is pretty cute here too.
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foxybullet321 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
love the wolf eating the moon :) very good :) I see talent heheh
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:iconmusgian:
musgian Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2012  Student Filmographer
just...wow.
This is absolutely beautiful. You're really talented.

Just...beautiful. It's all I can say right now
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:iconandharian:
Andharian Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2012  Student General Artist
This is amazing!
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:iconanimewolveslover:
AnimeWolveslover Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Iki's expressions made me happy :D Great job and can't wait for more!
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Birnenart Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2012
:D Iki's face!
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InkSheWolf Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2012  Student General Artist
Am I the only one who can see a red star by the moon? OuO
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DarkestRealms11 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012  Student
I saw it to!!! :D
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:iconjamybundy:
JamyBundy Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh Iki, why don't you see that scary cloud with the red eye? D:
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:iconnoxkey:
NoxKey Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2012  Student General Artist
there is a red dot in the sky. What is it??
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fractal2cry Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2012
awesome talent!
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I know I already commented but I feel like I have to add something about that red star in panel 3 :)

The idea you had is amazing!
But if I have to be frank, I had not noticed the shape the clouds formed. If I hadn't read the comment, I would have probably realized too late. Fact is, in my opinion, the red star is a little too bright. Sure, it stands out of the others stars (also because it's the only red one), but as I said before, it's kind of hypnotizing, and a little distracting, as I wasn't able to see the shape beneath it.

But then again, it may just be me, since it seems that all the other deviants managed to spot the cloud shape :D
My suggestion would be to turn the red star off a little. It would still be visible because it's the only red thing in the entire page, but it wouldn't look out of place this way :)

Other than that, I think this page is amazing and the idea of the cloud is brilliant!

I hope I helped you! ;)
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Rad-x Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2012
Az mi sie ziewnelo przy przedostatnim kadrze ;) Nie machnelas sie tam z perspektywa co do pyska? Dol wydaje sie byc bardziej frontalny anizeli gora. Chyba, ze mam takie zludzenie
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Ginger-love Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
awesome^^:la:
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Akimune Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Aaw the next page xD;... Iki sees things it must be scary |D I wonder what it is!
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:iconakimune:
Akimune Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love it. xD;
ZzzZzz *seriously...* <3
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Colecanth Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Eh? What's that red star?
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:iconligarththedragon:
Ligarththedragon Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I don't like the way that cloud is looking at that moon D:
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AJ90Tigress Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012
Iki's face in the first panel is amazing
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Midnight-Spectrum Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
XD I see a draaaaaaagon XD
Cool foreshadowing XD

And I freaking love Iki's face in the first panel
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FreeCalippo Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012
"mysterious" red star is going to be significant in the future i feel it.
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TakaiRaye Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012
I love the artwork on the first panel! The way the clouds are shaped as if a black wolf is going to engulf the moon. The red star as its' eye. A bit eerie really, but beautiful. Maybe its foreshadowing something?
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TakaiRaye Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012
third panel*
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SneeMonster Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Lol whenever I see that red star I move to wipe it off my screen and then realize it's in the panel.
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FooHasMoved Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
dat tongue
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TreefoxYllavyer Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012   General Artist
You guys did really well on the fourth panel <3
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:iconjericawinters:
JericaWinters Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012
Beautiful night lighting on this.
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scullyva Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012  Hobbyist
Will this story ever be published? If so, I would buy it :)
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shadowfiredragon7 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
iki your just so darn cute
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AlphaLunaWhiteWolf Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
What with the red star anyways? Is that a sign of Haidi or what ever his name is? :?

I love it anyways though! :D
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